Their Controlled variables were very good. Good information. The titles were nice and good. They could of made all the fonts the same type and the same size. The background also makes it hard to read.
I think that you and Sara did a good job with the controls of this lab and researching the background information. To make your lab more valid, I think you could explain what you mean by starting point and ending point in the data table, and make the procedure a little clearer. I was just a little confused what you meant abot some parts in the procedure. I think your lab was controlled. I think your conlusion was good. I think that in the analysis you should include why the one slipper was better. I liked your project and I think it was good. :)
I liked the reflection because it tells what you struggle with and tells the teachers that it was very distracting to work in the class room. I also Liked the graph and the pictures so i could see the what both the slippers looked like. I liked the picture in the background but it was dark and i had trouble seeing the word. I think if you lightened the background it would make it easier to read.
1. Your procedure was great and so was your data table and graph. 2. I would do somethings different and the procedure was great and clearly stated. 3. The environmental temp, the same fridge temp and the same place the probe was placed was the only things that you would have trouble keeping controlled. In the analysis whatever research you collected you should have added. Graphs were also great and clear. 4. Analysis needs the research information but other than that the conclusion and analysis was pretty good!
Their Controlled variables were very good. Good information. The titles were nice and good. They could of made all the fonts the same type and the same size. The background also makes it hard to read.
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background made it hard to read the information
keep the same font size
very good project
I think that you and Sara did a good job with the controls of this lab and researching the background information. To make your lab more valid, I think you could explain what you mean by starting point and ending point in the data table, and make the procedure a little clearer. I was just a little confused what you meant abot some parts in the procedure. I think your lab was controlled. I think your conlusion was good. I think that in the analysis you should include why the one slipper was better. I liked your project and I think it was good. :)
ReplyDeleteI liked the reflection because it tells what you struggle with and tells the teachers that it was very distracting to work in the class room.
ReplyDeleteI also Liked the graph and the pictures so i could see the what both the slippers looked like.
I liked the picture in the background but it was dark and i had trouble seeing the word.
I think if you lightened the background it would make it easier to read.
I think you did a great job on your project. Sometimes the font was hard to read though. But overall I think it was a good project.
ReplyDelete1. Your procedure was great and so was your data table and graph.
ReplyDelete2. I would do somethings different and the procedure was great and clearly stated.
3. The environmental temp, the same fridge temp and the same place the probe was placed was the only things that you would have trouble keeping controlled. In the analysis whatever research you collected you should have added. Graphs were also great and clear.
4. Analysis needs the research information but other than that the conclusion and analysis was pretty good!